class feedback

after watching the episode in class, the class gave feedback on what they thought about the episode 1. there is positive feedback and negative feedback but thats good because it means that we can reflect on whats wrong and we can make changed to appeal to the intended target audience.

Positive:
Good Opening Sequence x 2
Good establishing shots x 2
Good sound track
Milk shake shot good
Confident Characters
Well acted in places x 3
Good range of shots


Negative:
Tried way to hard to be funny
Girl isn't good actor
James way too extreme
Sound level not the same
Out side shot - flashback - needs to be clearer
Shots when characters look into camera don't work
Music cuts too quick
Way too long x 2
Too much swearing x 3
Not bleeped properly x 3
Alex's character changes too much
Shots look studenty
Should close up on cans
Too angry
Flashback too repetitive
Nobody does detention in a computer room
Characters kinda dull
Credits too fast
Door scene does not make sense x 2
Pier isn't french enough?
Too much fade out
Music too loud made them jump x 2
Unrealistic Characters

the numbers next to some of them mean that more than one person gave that feedback. after we got the feedback we decided to make some changed. firstly, we decided to make the editing of the next episodes simpler and not quite as jumpy because it was making the comic timing not work. there wasn't really any comic timing in the first episode.