audience feedback - what they thought of episode 1

i interviewed one of my friends who hadn't seen any of the 3 episodes of my web-series, 'detention deficit' on what he thought of them as a comedy. after watching the first episode i asked him what he thought about it?

I liked the characters, I thought there were some great personalities, it's a shame the episodes weren't longer so more of a plot could be constructed.

I thought the camera shots could be a bit too jumpy and quick for my liking and quite often it was hard too follow who was talking to who. So maybe if there were shots which were more slow and chilled, maybe with the view over the shoulder thing so we can see who is talking to who. That would be cool.

Also the swearing editing was kinda lame. Sorry but it was. I think either making the beeping out more subtle or just leaving the swearing in and having slightly less of it would be better. I don't think leaving it in would be that bad as beeping it just draws attention to it.

Overall a really good episode, just chill with the camera and the beeping. :)